英语短文改错（要专业的,正确率百分之80以上的）Onenightamancometomyhouseandtoldmewhatafamilywitheightchildrenhasn'teatenfordays.Itooksomericeandfollowedwithhim,Whenicametothefamily,Igavethericefo

Question

英语短文改错（要专业的,正确率百分之80以上的）
One night a man come to my house and told me what a family with eight children hasn't eaten for days.I took some rice and followed with him,When i came to the family,I gave the rice for the mother.She divided it into two,and went out,carry half of the rice with us.When she came back.I asked her,"Why did you go?"She answered,"To my neighbors.They are hungry,either."I used to think that when we were suffered,we were so focused on ourselves that we had time for others,but what she did made me realize i was wrong.
10个错误,请大神对应的找出!

Answer 1

come 改成came
what 改成 that
follow后面的with去掉
when后面的i大写（这应该是你的打字错误吧）
the rice for 的for要改成to
carry改成carrying
why 改成 where
either改成too
had time 中间加一个no
改出8个 能力有限 这些保证对 希望采纳