假如你叫约翰,请给你的朋友写张便条,邀请他,她参加你校的一项活动.英语短文,Dearlucia,thisFridayiwillhaveapartyinthecampus,thispartywillbethebiggestandmostinterestone,anditwillincludeahugenumberof

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假如你叫约翰,请给你的朋友写张便条,邀请他,她参加你校的一项活动.英语短文,
Dear lucia,
this Friday i will have a party in the campus,this party will be the biggest and most interest one,and it will include a huge number of activityies,like singing,dancing,playing cards and so on,we will invest some famous bands,like Bang which is your faviour pop bands,could you like to join with me?if you want to join us,please let me know,and the place will be the hall of university,it will start at 9pm.
i am looking forward to seeing you at the party.
yours,
John
我查到以上回答,能否给我翻译以下?或者自己写,不过也请给我翻译以下
自己写的话要短一点,
百度翻译结果：
亲爱的露西亚，
这个星期五我将有一个党在校园，这将是最大的和最感兴趣的一个，它包括了大量的activityies，喜欢唱歌，跳舞，打牌等等，我们将投入一些著名的乐队，这是你喜欢爆炸末期流行乐队，你能来参加我吗？如果你想加入我们，请让我知道，和地点将在大会堂的大学，它将开始在下午9。
我盼望在晚会上看到你。
你的，
约翰

Answer 1

百度翻译的对