这两句英语有错吗peopleusuallywishsomethingshappenfollowingwhattheywant.Therefore,manypeopleareinterestedinthedatethatfollowtheirwill.人们总是希望事情是按他们希望的结果发展的,说以很多人只对自已

Question

这两句英语有错吗
people usually wish some things happen following what they want.Therefore,many people are interested in the date that follow their will.
人们总是希望事情是按他们希望的结果发展的,说以很多人只对自已希望看到的数据感兴趣
能表达出这个意思吗?

Answer 1

1.最好改成：People always wish things to go on as they have expetced.Therefore,many people are only interested in the data (that) they wish to see.
2.
1）usually“通常”,没有always“总是”准确；
2）wish sth to do sth “希望某事怎么样”；
3）go on 进行/发展；
4）“只”最好加上only；
5）“数据”的复数形式是data,不是date.