请帮忙修正英语自我介绍Goodmorning,Itisreallyagreathonortohavethisopportunityforthisinterview.IhopeIcanmakeagoodperformancetoday.I'mconfidentthatIcansucceed.NowIwillintroducemyselfbriefly.Mynameisxxx,,I

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请帮忙修正英语自我介绍
Good morning,It is really a great honor to have this opportunity for this interview.I hope I can make a good performance today.I'm confident that I can succeed.Now I will introduce myself briefly.My name is x x x ,,I am 22 years old,born in FUJIAN province.I graduated from Qingdao University.My major is Costume Design.And I got my bachelor’s degree after my graduation in the year of 2012.I spent most of my time on study,and I’ve passed PCS and got Mandarin Level Two Grade-A results during my university.And I’ve acquired basic knowledge of my major.It is my long cherished dream to be a teacher and I am eager to get an opportunity to fully play my ability.I think I'm a good team player and a person of great honesty to others.Also,I am able to work under great pressure.I am confident that I am qualified for the post of teacher in your school..

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自我介绍
大家好,我叫...,来自钦州,我很高兴能在这里与大家认识,我是纺织工业学校的一名学生,我的专业是针织,我很荣幸能参加集训营,我参加集训营是因为我喜欢英语,我希望在集训营里学到的用在我以后的工作中,并开始我的职业生涯.因为我坚信将在很多领域都需要英语.
我的英语很差这就是我为什么在这里和大家一起学习,我知道我拿下英语将是一个巨大的挑战,但我坚信,“宝剑锋从磨出,梅花香自苦寒来”,坚持就是胜利,希望就在今后的学习中请大家多多指教,
Self-introduction
Hello everyone!My is.,from Qinzhou.I’m so glad to meet you,and I’m currently a student at Guangxi Textile Industrial School.my major is knitting.It’s my pleasure to join the CHAMPION training camp,because I love English and I hope I can learn something in the training for my future work.As we all know English is very useful in every field.
My English is limited that’s why I’m here.I know it’s a huge challenge for me to conquer English,but I believe that “No pains,no gains,success belongs to the persevering”,I hope I can learn more from you,Thank you!