把这段英文换成这样的说法有更好的嘛humanactivitysystemarethosethatconsistofpeopledoingsomethingpurposely我自己换的humanactivitysystemsarethosepeoplewhodoingsomethingwithpurpose有更好的嘛或者这个对

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把这段英文换成这样的说法 有更好的嘛
human activity system are those that consist of people doing something purposely
我自己换的
human activity systems are those people who doing something with purpose
有更好的嘛或者这个对吗
PS:我需要改写 我必须改写 就是说 有更好的改写的嘛

Answer 1

human activity systems are those people who doing something with purpose
换完不行,完全是中式的了.
human activity system are those in which people doing their own things for different purposes.
还算可以吧.