DearJim，Sogladthatyouareinterestedinmynewflat．NowIwouldliketellyousomethingaboutit．Locatinginthenorthofthecity，thisResidentialCenterissmallwithonlysixbuilding．Myflat，whichcoverstheareaof36squaremeter

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Dear Jim，
So glad that you are interested in my new flat．Now I would like tell you something about it．Locating in the north of the city，this Residential Center is small with only six building．My flat，which covers the area of 36square meters，is in the fourth floor in Building 2．It consisted of a sitting room，a bedroom，a kitchen and a toilet．When you enter into the flat，you will find yourself in the sitting room．The sitting room is the part that I like best，because it is brightly with a lovely balcony，which I can enjoy the beautiful garden below．Although my flat is small，I like them very much because it is comfortable．
Best regards，
Yours，
Li Hua．

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Dear Jim，
So glad that you are interested in my new flat．Now I would like∧tell you something about it．Locating in the north of the city，this Residential Center is small with only six building．My flat，which covers the area of 36square meters，is in the fourth floor in Building 2．It consisted of a sitting room，a bedroom，a kitchen and a toilet．When you enter into the flat，you will find yourself in the sitting room．The sitting room is the part that I like best，because it is brightly with a lovely balcony，which I can enjoy the beautiful garden below．Although my flat is small，I like them very much because it is comfortable．
Best regards，
Yours，
Li Hua．
详
1．在like后加to 考查介词． 此处为一个固定短语"would like to do"意为"想要做某事"．
2．locating改为located 考查非谓语． 表示"坐落于，位于"用"be located in"做状语．
3．bilding改为buildings 考查名词单复数．句子里有"six"故用复数形式．
4．the改为an  考查冠词．"an area of"意为固定短语"…的面积"．
5．in改为on 考查介词． 在具体某一层楼，用介词"on"．
6．consisted 改为consists 考查谓语． 叙述一般现在时，故用consists．
7．去掉into 考查介词．"enter"意为"进入"为及物动词，故去掉into．
8．brightly改为bright 考查形容词．根据句意"明亮的"需用形容词．
9．which改为where 考查连接词． 从这个句子结构判断为非限制性定语从句，先行词为"balcony"，表示地点，故用"where"．
10．them改为it 考查代词． 前面提到公寓很小，但是我很喜欢它．故用代词"it"．