一篇初中水平的英语作文.IsAfamilyteachernecessary.Moreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsaregoingtohavingfamilyteacher.Somepeoplethinkthatitisnecessary.Buttheyarealsosomepeopledon'tagree.Inmyopinion,Ipreferthesecon

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一篇初中水平的英语作文.
Is A family teacher necessary.
More and more middle school students are going to having family teacher .Some people think that it is necessary.But they are also some people don't agree.
In my opinion,I prefer the second viewpoint.First of all,students need some rest at the weekend .Than some family teachers are in the purpose of making money.Therefore,family teacher is not necessary .We can study well if we hard working.
如果还有错的地方告诉我,已经改了某些地方,但本人英语水平不好,错的地方也找不出来.

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2 they are also some people don't agree
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3 第二段稀奇古怪的,人家挣钱和你不需要没逻辑关系.而且就两个观点,first of all?all 用于三者以上. 不需要连接词,一个and 就行
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