新概念二册63课摘要写作答案和我的对比,有没有什么错误和不足的地方正确答案是WhenJeremyHampden,whoisgreatlyadmiredforhisgreatsenseofhumour,wasinvitedtomakeaspeechataweddingreception,heimmediatelyag

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新概念二册63课摘要写作答案和我的对比,有没有什么错误和不足的地方
正确答案是When Jeremy Hampden,who is greatly admired for his great sense of humour,was invited to make a speech at a wedding reception,he immediately agreed to do so.我写的是when jeremy is greatly admired for his great sense of humour ,one of jeremy's friend asked him whom is invited to make a speech at wedding reception and he immediately agreeto do so.

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When Jeremy Hampden, who is greatly admired for his great sense of humour, was invited to make a speech at a wedding reception, he immediately agreed to do so. Since the speech contained a lot of funny stories, it was a great success. When his six-year-old daughter, Jenny, wanted to go home after his speech, Jeremy was disappointed. She had not enjoyed it because she did not like to see so many people laughing at him.