帮我看看这个自我介绍有没有什么问题可以修改的Itisreallymylucktohavethisopportunityforaselfintroduction.Whyisthelucky?youknow?IcomeformvocationschoolbutIamveryconfident.SoIcherishthisopportunity.

Question

帮我看看这个自我介绍有没有什么问题可以修改的
It is really my luck to have this opportunity for a self introduction. Why is the lucky? you know ? I come form vocation school but I am very confident. So I cherish this opportunity.
Now i will introduce myself briefly
My name is zk. I am 17years old. I was born in an ordinary family. I like playing basketball just like Majority boys.But my life is not so.
When I was a child I have very good until my junior high school of second year before.why? because I lost myself.
I graduated from Urumqi No.8 Middle School.What a great school.But not before I have good
I'm addicted to the game about a year until I wake is about to test time.So I have to go to a vocational school but I work hard and constantly strive to become stronger.
finally I'm an example of adversity if a my life more fortitude

Answer 1

It is really my luck to have this opportunity for a self introduction
change
its my gold to have this.