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英语改错
As far as I'm concerned,lintening to the music doesnt help76
study take me for example ,I can't cocentratemy attention 77
my study while listening to music.I find background music 78
especially disturbed. besides,my parents wouldnt approve of 79
me listen to music while I'mstudying, because they think it 80
will prevent me from focusing on my study.If we hear me listening81

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As far as I'm concerned,listening to the music doesn't help studying.Take me for example ,I can't cocentrate my attention on my study while listening to music.I find background music especially disturbs.besides,my parents wouldn't approve of me listening to music while I'm studying,because they think it will prevent me from focusing on my study.