两个“when”引导的从句可以连用么?比如：I’llnotforgetthedaywhenIsaidgood-byetoher,whensheburstsintotears.如果不正确的话,该怎样表达呢?her后再用who引导么?3Q!

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两个“when”引导的从句可以连用么?
比如：I’ll not forget the day when I said good-bye to her,when she bursts into tears.如果不正确的话,该怎样表达呢?her后再用who引导么?
3Q!

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理论上可以,因为对于when的使用没有语法错误.但是你这样并不是连用,因为中间用了个逗号将这个句子一分为二,听起来更像是口语.然后纠正你里面的时态用法,我会这样表达：I'll never forget the day when i say good-bye to her and she was bursting into tears.或者是要用said的话,就不需要when了.