英语课上，老师要求同学相互修改作文。假设以下日记为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。日记中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加

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英语课上，老师要求同学相互修改作文。假设以下日记为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。日记中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　　　 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Today we have a short trip to Nanshan Park. We set out by the school bus at 7:20 a.m.. The weather was pleasant and all of us were exciting. After two hours ride we arrived at there at nine thirty. Then we began our program as soon as we got off the bus. We played games in the forest very happy. At 12:30 we had lunch in a restaurant. In the afternoon we walked to the wild animal park where we saw varieties animals. We enjoyed ourselves very much. Time passed quickly but we had to leave. It was half past six when they returned safely.

 

Answer 1

1. have 改为had　　　 2. by 改为 in　　　 3. exciting 改为excited　　　 4. hours 改为 hours’5. 删除第一个at　　　 6. happy 改为 happily　　 7. the 改为 a　　　 8. varieties 后加 of 9. but ...