Firstly,I'dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyself.I'mQiuzijia.MyEnglishnameisAerolite.I'mon15,goingon16.ThenIwanttotalkaboutsomeofmyhobbies.这里有没有语法错误,中式英语或者什么不妥的地方?求指教

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Firstly,I'd like to tell you something about myself.I'm Qiuzijia.My English name is Aerolite.I'm on 15,going on 16.Then I want to talk about some of my hobbies.这里有没有语法错误,中式英语或者什么不妥的地方?求指教

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Firstly,I'd like to tell you about myself.I'm Qiuzijia.My English name is Aerolite.I'm 15 and will be 16 years old. Then I want to talk about my hobbies.