一小段英语,看看有没有什么语法或其它错误.Nobodycouldhavefailedtonoticethefactshoppingonlinehasbecomeacommonphenomenoninmanypeople.Turningalookaround,wecanfindagreatmanyexampleslikethis.Asaresult,shoppingo

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一小段英语,看看有没有什么语法或其它错误.
Nobody could have failed to notice the fact shopping online has become a common phenomenonin many people.Turning a look around,we can find a great many
examples like this.As a result,shoppingonline calls for close attention of the whole
society.
看这段吧
Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that shopping online has become a common
phenomenon in many people.Turning a look around,
we can find a great many examples like this.As a result，shopping online calls for close attention of the whole society.

Answer 1

phenomenonin 后面加among,你是不是漏打了,别的没有错误