请问下面这段话有没有语病或者表达不清的,Hello!IalwayswishtojoinXXXXcompany.IgraduatedfromTianjinuniversityoftechnicaloftheyear2006.Attheschooltime,Ilearnmuchexpertknowledge,suchasDigitalelectron,Analogue

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请问下面这段话有没有语病或者表达不清的,
Hello!I always wish to join XXXX company.
I graduated from Tianjin university of technical of the year 2006 .At the school time ,I learn much expert knowledge ,such as Digital electron,Analogue electron,signal and system,C program,principle of communication ,structure of data,arithmetic of computer ,physical optical,computer network,media,EDA&DSP ,special English etc.Afer my graduation ,I learn the construction of oscillometer and the usage method of curren t measure equipment at work time .I aslo have the experience of ERP using .I use to work as a TE ,testing the vibration motor of mobile phone ,for founding out reason of the badness ,and then inprove the production.
All of this from practice to work normally ,I was always able to fit in with the job quickly .I believe I can conpetent for Manufacturing Test Engineer .I send both my resume and correlative material .I wish I am the great competitor of this job in your opinion ,and I hope that I can receive inform of interview as soon as possible .My mobile phone number：XXXXXXXX
Thank you for reading my letter and considering my applycation .

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第一句就不是很好噢,不要用wish比较好.还有大学的名字,你确定是那样么.不是tianjin University of Technology么.Hello!I always wish to join XXXX company.I graduated from Tianjin university of technical of th...