这句话的语法对马?我是外国人.下面话的语法对吗?帮我改一点最像中国人的语气.我是00科学生对不起00课作业和教授的E-mail

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这句话的语法对马?
我是外国人.下面话的语法对吗?
帮我改一点最像中国人的语气.
我是00科学生 对不起 00课作业和教授的 E-mail

Answer 1

I was wondering that what is this sentence used in? in daily life or a formal letter?
That could be different.
For instance,in daily lilfe we tent to say in this way,
你好,不好意思,我是00科的学生,请问可以告诉我这课的作业和我们教授的邮箱吗?
At the end of the talk, we should say "谢谢" before we say goodbye.
On the other hand, in a formal letter, we always talk more about the reasons of your purposes, I think. And the addresse is slightly different, too. Here I won't show a example for you since I don't know very well on it. If you must, you can turn to the net for"中文书信格式" to obtain more information.
P.S. Actually, your sentence is "CHINESE" enough for daily life.Just take it easy and pay attention to the pitch and tone when you talk in chinese.