英语高手进阿恳求帮忙修改英语作文Whydoyoupreferskiinginswissalps?ThefirstreasonisbecausecomparedtoswimmingIloveskiingverymuch.Ithinkskiingisaveryinterestingsport.ThesecondreasonisthatI'veneverbeentoS

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Why do you prefer skiing in swiss alps?
The first reason is because compared to swimming I love skiing very much.I think skiing is a very interesting sport.
The second reason is that I've never been to Switzerland,I heart that Switzerland is a beautiful country.
Finally,Switzerland has 10 very well-known ski resorts,such as Zermatt,St.Moritz ,Davos and Arosa and so on.
For those reason,I prefer skiing in swiss alps.
Why do you prefer swimming in Hawaii?
The first reason is because compared to skiing I love swimming very much.I think swimming is a very interesting sport.
The second reason is that I want to go to Hawaii and see the Huladance,I only see it in the TV.I think it is very fantastic.
Finally,On the beach of Hawaii,I think I can see many beautiful girls and handsome boys.in the evening,I also can see the beautiful sunset.
For those reason,I prefer swimming in hawail.
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Why do you prefer skiing in swiss alps?
The first reason is compared to swimming I love skiing very much.I think skiing is a very interesting sport.
The second reason is that I've never been to Switzerland,I heart that Switzerland is a beautiful country.
Finally,Switzerland has 10 very well-known ski resorts,such as Zermatt,St.Moritz ,Davos and Arosa and so on.
For those reasons,I prefer skiing in swiss alps.
Why do you prefer swimming in Hawaii?
The first reason is compared to skiing I love swimming very much.I think swimming is a very interesting sport.
The second reason is that I want to go to Hawaii and see the Huladance,Ijust see it in TV.I think it is very fantastic.
Finally,On the beach of Hawaii,I think I can see many beautiful girls and handsome boys.at dusk,I also can see the beautiful sunset.
For those reasons,I prefer swimming in hawail.