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看一下是否有语法错误Goodevening!Ihaven’tseenyouforalongtimeandImissyoueveryday!Iknowyou'rebusy,soIdon'tthinkiwanttodisturbyou.I'lltellyouagoodnews.MyfatherreceiveamessagefromNiuShanmiddleschoolaltho

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看一下是否有语法错误
Good evening!I haven’t seen you for a long time and I miss you every day!I know you're busy,so I don't think i want to disturb you .I'll tell you a good news.My father receive a message from NiuShan middle school although i didn't report there.
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额,这个应该说有几个地方表达有问题了.
首先so I don't think i want to disturb you 这句就语句不通顺了,你觉得呢
改成 so I feel sorry to disturb you.因为你写这封信已经打扰到他了.
然后是I'll tell you a good news这里改成I want to tell you a good news.因为你现在就要告诉他这个好消息了.
然后是最后一句话,i didn't report there,这个你应该是想说你没报考那个学校,不是这么表达的,应该是,I didn't apply for it.