请问我这个汉译英的错误在哪儿?Inadditiontothedevelopedeconomic,Shanghaialsohasdeepmodernculturaldepositsandsomanyplacesofinterest.除了经济发达之外,上海还拥有深厚的近代城市文化底蕴和众多历史

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请问我这个汉译英的错误在哪儿?
In addition to the developed economic,Shanghai also has deep modern cultural deposits and so many places of interest.
除了经济发达之外,上海还拥有深厚的近代城市文化底蕴和众多历史古迹.
在批改网上批改说是语法不规范,小虾不懂哪里不规范?

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In addition to the developed economy, Shanghai also has old modern culture and many historical buildings
so many places of interest.=>so many intersting places
deep modern culture deposit.没有这样的说法
economic=>enconomy