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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
In order to live happy,we should keep in good health.Personally,to stay healthy,we should do as follows.Firstly,taking exercise regularly.We can do sports such as swimming,running and playing the basketball.Such sports keep us energetic and also makes us happy.Secondly,they should develop a good lifestyle.Going to bed early and get up early can be helpful.Finally,we need to have a healthy and balancing diet.It is bad for us to eat a lot chocolate or meat,that contains much sugar and fat.It is necessary that one should eat various kind of healthy food such as fish,eggs,vegetables and fruits.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
In order to live happy,we should keep in good health.Personally,to stay healthy,we should do as follows.Firstly,taking exercise regularly.We can do sports such as swimming,running and playing the basketball.Such sports keep us energetic and also makes us happy.Secondly,they should develop a good lifestyle.Going to bed early and get up early can be helpful.Finally,we need to have a healthy and balancing diet.It is bad for us to eat a lot chocolate or meat,that contains much sugar and fat.It is necessary that one should eat various kind of healthy food such as fish,eggs,vegetables and fruits.
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In order to live happy,we should keep in good health.Personally,to stay healthy,we should do as follows.Firstly,taking exercise regularly.We can do sports such as swimming,running and playing the basketball.Such sports keep us energetic and also makes us happy.Secondly,they should develop a good lifestyle.Going to bed early and get up early can be helpful.Finally,we need to have a healthy and balancing diet.It is bad for us to eat a lot∧chocolate or meat,that contains much sugar and fat.It is necessary that one should eat various kind of healthy food such as fish,eggs,vegetables and fruits.
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71.happy改为happily;考查副词,这里用副词形式作状语修饰动词live.
72.taking改为take;考查句子结构,因为本句没有注意,所以用动词原形置于句首构成祈使句.
73.去掉the;考查冠词的用法,球类面前不加the.
74. makes 改为make;考查并列成分,在这个句子中keep与make并列作Such sports的谓语,形式要保持一致,故用make.
75.they 改为we;考查人称代词,结合上下文分析句意应为"其次,我们应该培养一种健康的生活方式",故用人称代词we.
76.get改为getting;考查并列结构,这里用getting 与前面的going是并列成分,同为动名词短语作主语.
77.balancing 改为balanced;考查过去分词作定语,因为diet与动词balance存在逻辑上的主谓关系,故用过去分词作定语.
78.a lot 后面加加of;考查固定短语,a lot是表示程度的一个词组,不能修饰名词,a lot of意为"许多",修饰名词.
79. that改为which;考查关系代词,分析句子可知这是一个非限制性定语从句,先行词为a lot chocolate or meat,故用关系代词which.
80. kind改为kinds;考查名词的单复数,kind是可数名词,前面有various(多种多样的)修饰,所以要用复数形式kinds.
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71.happy改为happily;考查副词,这里用副词形式作状语修饰动词live.
72.taking改为take;考查句子结构,因为本句没有注意,所以用动词原形置于句首构成祈使句.
73.去掉the;考查冠词的用法,球类面前不加the.
74. makes 改为make;考查并列成分,在这个句子中keep与make并列作Such sports的谓语,形式要保持一致,故用make.
75.they 改为we;考查人称代词,结合上下文分析句意应为"其次,我们应该培养一种健康的生活方式",故用人称代词we.
76.get改为getting;考查并列结构,这里用getting 与前面的going是并列成分,同为动名词短语作主语.
77.balancing 改为balanced;考查过去分词作定语,因为diet与动词balance存在逻辑上的主谓关系,故用过去分词作定语.
78.a lot 后面加加of;考查固定短语,a lot是表示程度的一个词组,不能修饰名词,a lot of意为"许多",修饰名词.
79. that改为which;考查关系代词,分析句子可知这是一个非限制性定语从句,先行词为a lot chocolate or meat,故用关系代词which.
80. kind改为kinds;考查名词的单复数,kind是可数名词,前面有various(多种多样的)修饰,所以要用复数形式kinds.
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