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英语小短文达人请帮我找找错误的地方以及可以修改得更好的地方ThemovieIenjoyedisGonewiththewind.I'dstronglyrecommendittoyoubecauseIreallyliketheactressVivienLeigh.Sheplayedtheleadingrole-----Scarlet
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英语小短文 达人请帮我找找错误的地方以及可以修改得更好的地方
The movie I enjoyed is Gone with the wind.
I'd strongly recommend it to you because I really like the actress Vivien Leigh.She played the leading role-----Scarlett in the movie.Please let me introduce Scarlett to you.
Scarlett,a woman like a cat.She is strong ,peacockish,rapacious,crule & selfish.
She is the most strong one.Whether she face the war,the death of her father and mother,poor life or the death of her daughter.She is the first tide over the difficulty.
This is Scarlett.She has too much unbelievable strength.She is still a child.She still pays
the price for her growth.
Her words echo in the ears with perverse voice"After all,tomorrow is another day."
The movie I enjoyed is Gone with the wind.
I'd strongly recommend it to you because I really like the actress Vivien Leigh.She played the leading role-----Scarlett in the movie.Please let me introduce Scarlett to you.
Scarlett,a woman like a cat.She is strong ,peacockish,rapacious,crule & selfish.
She is the most strong one.Whether she face the war,the death of her father and mother,poor life or the death of her daughter.She is the first tide over the difficulty.
This is Scarlett.She has too much unbelievable strength.She is still a child.She still pays
the price for her growth.
Her words echo in the ears with perverse voice"After all,tomorrow is another day."
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1 the movie I enjoy,enjoyed 表示你过去喜欢,现在不一定喜欢
2 I strongly 就可以了
3如果是书面语的话,please可以省了,直接就是let me introduce就可以了
4Scarlett,a woman like a cat,is strong .第一句原句都无法构成一个完整的句子,缺少谓语
5She is the strongest one.she faced the war,the death of her parents and daughter,or the poor life .其实我不明白你为什么要用whether.你最好告诉我你的中文意思吧.
6 时态问题.She had too much unbelievable strength.She was like a child and had paid the price for her growth
姐们,要改的地方还有很多呀.
2 I strongly 就可以了
3如果是书面语的话,please可以省了,直接就是let me introduce就可以了
4Scarlett,a woman like a cat,is strong .第一句原句都无法构成一个完整的句子,缺少谓语
5She is the strongest one.she faced the war,the death of her parents and daughter,or the poor life .其实我不明白你为什么要用whether.你最好告诉我你的中文意思吧.
6 时态问题.She had too much unbelievable strength.She was like a child and had paid the price for her growth
姐们,要改的地方还有很多呀.
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