自己写的英文练习,请看看有无语法错误Oh!Human,pleasewatchout.TheGodgavebirthtotheearth.Madethehumantolookafterhiswork.Butthehumanbrokeoutthewarwhichdestroiedheearthandourgoodness.Intime,theGod

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自己写的英文练习,请看看有无语法错误
Oh ! Human , please watch out . The God gave birth to the earth .Made the human to look after his work . But the human broke out the war which destroied he earth and our goodness . In time , the God was back . He made the dark cloud to block out the light and speaded to anywhere which has war . And then , the plant can`t grow . Hunger made the human stop warring . At last , the human thinking about what they have done before.So, what do you thing what you have done

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"Made the human to look after his work ."缺主语,前面加个IT
"the human thinking about what they have done before"缺谓语,THINKING不能作谓语
很多地方说不上语法不对（除了打错的单词）,就是整个很奇怪,包括时态
按照ωodeSweEt那样改就变得顺畅很多