Iplantodotwothingstoday,onethingistobuyamicrowaveoventhrough...请指点语法错误.写了个日记,是说我通过网上商城买微波炉的.TodayisSunday,Irestathome(还是ihavearestathome?).Iplantodotwothingstoday

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I plan to do two things today,one thing is to buy a microwave oven through ...请指点语法错误.
写了个日记,是说我通过网上商城买微波炉的.
Today is Sunday,I rest at home (还是i have a rest at home?).I plan to do two things today,one thing is to buy a microwave oven through the internet.The other thing is to tidy my room.
I decided to buy microwave oven at first,so i open the shopping website.I mainly choose the goods from the 360buy and YiHaodian online store.When i click the catalogue to microwave oven ,there are various type of microwaves oven (emerged) to me .I have no idea to choose which kind of brands and types.Then i decided to choose one according to my budget.
After more than one hour of choice,finally i choose a microwave oven with the barbecue function.Up to now,the microwave oven hasn't sent to my home yet.I hope it can make me satisfied .

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写日记的话,应该使用过去式.I just rested at home.I planed to do two things today.One thing was to buy a microwave oven on the internet. The other thing was to clean my room.
时态应该一致.I bought microwave oven firstly, so I opened the shopping website.Generally,I mainly choose the goods from the 360buy and YiHaodian online store. When I clicked microwave oven to the search box, there are various types of microwave oven appearing into my eyes. I didn't know to choose which kind of brands and types. Then I decided to choose one according to my budget.
After more than one hour,I choose a microwave oven with the barbecue function.Now the microwave oven hasn't been sent to my home yet. I hope it can make me satisfied.