谁能帮我把英语作文改错解析一下!We'llneverforgetadaywhenmyclassmatesandIpaidavisitofachemistryfactorylastyear.itwasthelargeonewithnearly20,000workers.wecouldlookcolorfulflowers,grass,andtreesanywhere,We

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谁能帮我把英语作文改错解析一下!
We'll never forget a day when my classmates and I paid a visit of a chemistry factory last year .it was the large one with nearly 20,000 workers.we could look colorful flowers,grass,and trees anywhere,We also visited some workshops and saw the workers working hardly.we talked to them and leared a lot of.we understod them further.in the way home we felt tiring,but we all thought we had a very goog day.we really hope we can get more chances of leaving school and learning social experience
1.forget a day / forget the day.2.visit of /visit to 3.was the /was a 4.could look colorful /could see colorful 5.trees anywhere/trees everywhere 6.working hardly./working hard 7.a lot of/删去to 8.in the way /on the way 9.we felt tiring/we felt tired 10.leaving school /leaving the school
我需要你们帮我回答一下为什么这么改,这么改的原因是什么

Answer 1

看来你的英语基础不好啊!
1、特指参观那天,所以用“the",不用"a".
2、这里的"visit"是名词,pay a visit to...
3、”the"是特指用的、独一无二的,这个工厂未必是最大的.
4、“look"意思是”看、瞧“是一个动作,而”see"意思是“看到”,即亲眼所见的结果.
5、anywhere范围大于everywhere,前者意思是“无论什么地方”,后者意思是“到处”,工厂里无论什么地方都有花草和树木是不可能的.
6、首先work hard是固定搭配,意思是努力工作,这里的hard是副词.其次hardly虽然是副词,但意思是：几乎不; 简直不; 刚刚; 严厉地,粗鲁地.
7、应该去掉“of",意思是通过交谈,我们收获很大.
8、首先英语中”在去XX的路上“就是”on the way",另外用中国式的理解可以这么说：因为是在路面上行走,而不是在路的里面走,所以是”on“不是"in".
9、tiring是“令...疲倦”,而"tired"是形容词,意思是“疲倦”,因为前面有felt（feel的过去式、过去分词）,所以“回家的路上我们都感觉很累”应该是“on the way home we felt tired".
10、本句意思是：我们都非常希望有更多的机会离开学校参加社会实践活动.这里的学校特指他正在上学的那所学校,所以要加“the”.