todayisTuesday,Iwithmyclassmategotothezooweareplaythecorsairandgun,at4:00,Igohomedohomework,atnight9:00Iamgotothebedasleep,IthinkI'llagooddream请问这段英语句子有多少错点,只要求说错误的地方,请

Question

today is Tuesday ,I with my classmate go to the zoo
we are play the corsair and gun,at 4:00 ,I go home
do homework,at night 9:00 I am go to the bed a sleep,
I think I'll a good dream
请问这段英语句子有多少错点,只要求说错误的地方,请指出并改正

Answer 1

Today is Tuesday, I went to the zoo with my classmate. We played corsair and gun. I came home at 4 o'clock. I have done my homework. I will go to bed at 9 o'clock and I think i will have a good dream.