看下这段英语有什么错误lateinApril,from26thto28th,aphoto'sshowwasheldinourschool.itwasagreatsuccess.allthephotostakenbythestudentsthemselves.therewerebothblack-and-whiteandcolorphotos.presentourschoollife.the

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看下这段英语有什么错误
late in April,from 26th to 28th,a photo's show was held in our school.it was a great success.all the photos taken by the students themselves.there were both black-and-white and color photos.present our school life.the beauty of nature.festival activity and so on.all the works of arts was on show in the reading room on the second floor.every day,the large number of students went to enjoy the show but they were surprised to find that the pictures were so wonderful.for short,this photo show really made our life colorful.
有什么错误啊.能改出几个算几个

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一行﹕photo show
二行﹕were taken by the students
三行﹕presenting
四行﹕前2'.'改为‘﹐’﹔activities
五行﹕were on show ; a large
六行﹕and they
七行﹕In short
另﹕每句首字用大楷