GemmaSpofforthhaschosentoswimontothe2012Olympicsafteratroubledtenmonths．The23-year-oldformerPortsmouthNorthseaswimmerfirstquestionedherfuturearoundthetimeoflastOctober'sCommonwealth

Question

Gemma Spofforth has chosen to swim on to the 2012Olympics after a troubled ten months．
The 23-year-old former Portsmouth Northsea swimmer first questioned her future around the time of last October's Commonwealth Games．
More doubts followed when she failed to defeat her world 100meters backstroke title in Shanghai last weekend when she had been suffering from the sickness．
Away from the pool，her father's partner died in March，just three and a half years after Spofforth's mother passed away．
After finishing 13^th in the 50meters backstroke yesterday，she said，"Last night，there was a really big decision for me-whether I should give up because this year hasn't been fun，2009was maybe my time．
But I decided it's 100per cent commitment from here on in，get fit and get ready for next year．
It was a huge decision to make overnight．A lot of thought went into it，I didn't get much sleep．I came down this morning，had a relatively good race，got through and realized that this is where I want to be．
Next year is the one and I am only going to do it if I really want to do it，and if I have one inkling （暗示） over the next couple of weeks it's not right for me then I will quit．I talked to my couch Martyn Wilby a couple of times．I talked to him this morning．
He said to me，‘If you come to me and say you're not sure you want to swim then that's it，you're done．You can only do this sport if you are 100percent invested and this year hasn't been 100percent for me．'"
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1．以约30词概括以上短文的主要内容；
2．然后以约120词就"全力以赴，才能成功"这一话题发表你的看法，内容包括：
（1）原文给你的启示；
（2）以自己或他人的事例说明如果我们不全力以赴，是很难取得最后的成功的．
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1．作文中可以使用亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯．

Answer 1

Due to sad experience at home and in her health，Gamma Spottorth felt unsure about herself，and intended to quit．Finally with the encouragement of her coach，she decided to make every effort to compete in the coming 2012 Olympics．（概括）
This news report tells us about a world champion's decision．From it，we can learn as humans，we may all at a certain time doubt ourselves and fall into a low state．But we should not give up so easily．More often than not，if we failed，that is because we haven't tried our best．（启示）
One of my experiences is another convincing example．In Senior One，I signed up for the National English Proficiency Competition at the urge of my teacher．But I was uncertain of myself and didn't put much effort into it．Although I attended training course and finished some practice tests，I only got the third prize in the competition．In great regret，I thought if I had tried harder，I would have won the first or at least second prize!【高分句型一】（事例说明如果我们不全力以赴，是很难取得最后的成功的）
In conclusion，once determined，we should go all out to fulfill our dream．【高分句型二】（个人观点）