帮我修改一下作文,多给分英语作文Itwasafinedayyesterday.MrZhangandhisgrandsonwenttorivertocatchfisheswithnet.MrZhangcatchabigfish,andtheyfeltveryhappyandthentheywenthometogether.Theyputthefishonthe

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It was a fine day yesterday.Mr Zhang and his grandson went to river to catch fishes with net .Mr Zhang catch a big fish,and they felt very happy and then they went home together.They put the fish on the table and Mr Zhang want to kill it to make dinner .But the boy thought that they should not eat it ,they should take the fish back to the river.Mr Zhang thought a minute and agreed with his grandson.Then they went to the river again and put the fish in the water .But,in a minute ,they saw a bigger fish eat a fish which they put in the water.That let the boy down.He said,"It is too terrible."

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Yesterday is a fine day, Mr Zhang and his grandson went to the rive for catching fish with special net. After a minutes ,Mr Zhang got a big one and was very happy Then hey went home and put it on the table.Mr Zhang wanted to make a big dinner by using this big fish.But his grandson didn't want to do this,he thought that they should make the big fish come back to the river agian.
After thought for a mintues, Mr Zhang agreed and took the fish to the river with his grandson.Suddently, A bigger fish came here and quickly ate the fish."oh unbeliveable" they said.
我还是觉得你的文章写的就有点问题,如果孙子觉得不应该吃鱼,为什么还让爷爷抓鱼回家呢!