求大神帮我检查一下英语有没有错误,thelemon'sdreamyousayyourfavoritefruitislemon.ilaughatyou.isaylemonissoursoyoualwaysjealous.isayiwillplantalotoflemonsforyou.yousayitisimpossible.ihope

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求大神帮我检查一下英语有没有错误,
the lemon's dream

you say your favorite fruit is lemon.
i laugh at you.
i say lemon is sour so you always jealous.
i say i will plant a lot of lemons for you.
you say it is impossible.

i hope i will have a mountain slope ,there will be a lot of flowers of lemons .

when spring comes ,we can see the lemon flowers hand in hand .
when summer comes ,we can lie on the slope in the evening .
when fall comes ,we can harvest our fruit ,i will see every lemon will present your sweat smile .
when winter comes ,we can go to see the snow togother .

i will never give up
because this is your dream
so this is my dream .

you are the lemon of my eye.
the green lemon is my love .
when the lemon is yellow ,i hope we can have a family ,so i will do all things as i can for ours dream .
please bilieve me ,i will finish this dream .

when the potpourri spread in air my dream will come true .
the boy and the girl will get there dream in the golden fall .
but it only is a dream ,a dream nobody can touch.
柠檬的梦
你说,你最爱的水果是柠檬我总是嘲笑你我说,柠檬的酸和你的爱吃醋一样我说,我会为你播种柠檬你说,那不可能
我希望我可以有一片山坡,山坡上种满柠檬花,开满柠檬果
当春天来临时,我们可以手牵着手去看柠檬花当夏天来临时,我们可以躺在山坡上当秋天来临时,我们可以收获柠檬的果实,每个柠檬的果实上都会洋溢着你甜美的微笑当冬天来临时,我们可以一起在山坡上看雪的降临
我永远不会放弃,因为这是你的梦,所以这也是我的梦
绿色的柠檬代表着我的爱当柠檬变为黄色时,我希望我们可以组成一个美好的家庭,所以我会尽我的一切所能完成我们的梦想.
请相信我,这个梦想终究会实现
当柠檬的香气洋溢在整个山坡的空气中的时候,梦想就将会实现
男孩和女孩在这个金色的秋天收获他们的梦想
但这是梦,这只是一个梦
一个无人可以触及的梦

Answer 1

we can lie on the slope in the evening .【晚上我们可以躺在斜坡上】你‘晚上’没有翻译出来哦
you are the lemon of my eye.【你是我眼中的柠檬】这句你上面没有翻译哦
好了,没有错误了