以“Iwanttobeafamoussoccerplayer,but.”为题,写一篇短文要求：（1）有利有弊.（2）语句通顺,无明显语法错误.（3）字数60个以上.

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以“I want to be a famous soccer player ,but.”为题,写一篇短文
要求：（1）有利有弊.（2）语句通顺,无明显语法错误.（3）字数60个以上.

Answer 1

I want to be a famous soccer player,but my parents will be very disappointed.Being a soccer player is always one of my dreams.I want to joint the national team and win matches for our country and my parents and firends will be very proud of me.However,my parents think that it is all right to play soccer ball,but it is totally not worth it to treat soccer as a career.They think that being a business man will ensure a better fulture.
按照要求写的~如果靠谱,