英语翻译修道士们喜欢冬天,而不太喜欢夏天.因为在冬天,他们可以更多地过无人打扰的生活.狗也比较自由,被放出围栏,四处遛达.冬天常来修道院参观的只有一批批滑雪者.他们在圣诞节或复

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英语翻译
修道士们喜欢冬天,而不太喜欢夏天.因为在冬天,他们可以更多地过无人打扰的生活.狗也比较自由,被放出围栏,四处遛达.冬天常来修道院参观的只有一批批滑雪者.他们在圣诞节或复活节到那儿去.这些热爱高山清静环境的年轻人每年都受到圣伯纳德修道院的热烈欢迎.
The monks like winter than summer,because during the winter,they have more no disturbing life.So did their dogs,The dogs are free out of the enclosure.Just some sliders come to visit the monastery when Christmas or Easter arrived.The young people who love high mountain and peace are welcomed to monastery every year
注意：原版翻译我有,但这里我不需要原版翻译.
我想就这句英文分析它有没有错,若有请指出错哪,为什么 并且怎么改

Answer 1

表达上没什么错误.
when Christmas or Easter arrived,arrived 要改为现在时态 arrives