求高手修改一下英语错误的单词过去式LastwinterClaire(went)toSt.Moritzforaskiingholiday.She(liked)thejourneyverymuch.Sheandherschoolfriends(arrived)atZurichairport,andthenthey(travelled)toSt.Moritzbytrain.The

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求高手修改一下英语错误的单词过去式
Last winter Claire (went) to St.Moritz for a skiing holiday.She (liked) the journey very much.She and her school friends(arrived) at Zurich airport,and then they (travelled) to St.Moritz by train.They(stayed) in a youth hostel,because the hotels (were) too expensive for them.it (went) too late to go skiing on the first day,but they(saw)their skiing instructor und he (helped) them because they (wanted) to hire some skis.Claire (hired)some skis,some sticks and some boots.The next day,she and her friends(went) their first lesson.Claire (was)in the beginner class and her friends (were) in the beginners class,too.it (was) their first skiing holiday

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对不起啊,前段时间很忙,没怎么上网
“Last winter”这是一个表过去的时间次,所以就奠定了文章的基本语法为过去时.
She (liked) the journey very much.这句话如果用liked就表示强调过去喜欢,也可用一般时likes（第三人称）表现在也还喜欢着.
She and her school friends(arrived) at Zurich airport,and then they (travelled) to St.Moritz by train.就这句话来说没有语法错误,但是我们一般不会这样表达吧,“她和她的校友先到达了苏黎世机场,然后坐火车去圣莫里茨”,怪怪的.
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总的来说,语法没什么大的错误,但是就整篇文章而言,逻辑性不够强,读起来不太通顺.如果你有需要,可以和我联系,我再和你讨论