帮我修改小学二年级英语60秒演讲,尽量不要重复用单词.MynameisMary.I'meightyearsold.Ilikefish.Idon'tlikebread.Icanswim.Ican'tski.Ilikered.Idon'tlikeblack.AlthoughIamnottall,likesportsverymuch.IlikeLiuX

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帮我修改小学二年级英语60秒演讲,尽量不要重复用单词.
My name is Mary.I'm eight years old.I like fish.I don't like bread.I can swim.I can't ski.I like red.I don't like black.Although I am not tall,like sports very much.I like Liu Xiang.Why?Because he very quickly.I would like to have a swim competition with foreign friends!I will be won!也可适当添加句子不要太复杂,但求打动评委.

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My name is Mary.I'm eight years old.I like fish,but I don't like bread.My favorite color is red.I don't like black.Although I am not tall,I like sports very much.I like Liu Xiang.Why?Because he runs very fast.Now,i will tell you a secret.I am good at swimming.I want to have a swim competition with foreign friends one day!I will be the winner!
没有改动太多,个别句子调换了一下位置,后面说的要和外国朋友比赛游泳,所以把前面涉及到游泳的句子放到了后面,衔接起来,用了一个词组be good at “擅长……”
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