英语改错DearMissGreen,Howareyoudoingrecently?Therewillbetalentshowinourschool,soI'mwritingtoinviteyoutowatchthem.Thetalentshow,itsthemeis"English-BridgetotheWorld",willbeheldinourschoolhallfrom8:30amto11:30

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Dear Miss Green,
How are you doing recently?There will be talent show in our school,so I'm writing to invite you to watch them.The talent show,its theme is"English-Bridge to the World",will be held in our school hall from 8:30 am to 11:30 am in 16th September.Every class is requiring to put on one performance,in which students can sing songs,dance,tell stories or giving speeches.I'm sure we will have a better time enjoying the performance.I'd be very glad that if you could come.If you had some questions,please call me.
Yours,
LiHua

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