请检查一下自我介绍有没有错误,有什么更好的建议也可以提出来,Everyteachergoodmorning.Justlikeyousee,Iamaactiveboynamedl.Iam20yearsoldthisyear,Icomefromabeautifulcity,Tangshan.Iliketoplaybasketballb

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请检查一下自我介绍有没有错误,有什么更好的建议也可以提出来,
Every teacher good morning.Just like you see,I am a active boy named l.I am 20 years old this year,I come from a beautiful city,Tangshan.I like to play basketball best .basketball makes me change into a bright boy from an introverted boy.I really like the life of university .Because in the
university,I can make a lot of friends,learn much knowledge and the life of university can make me change more independently.Although my English isn't very good,I hope to make my English level get the exaltation after studying for years.Please believe in methat I will study hard .I really like the school,not only the school is very beautiful,but also the teacher is very good.I hope to come to study here,it is my honor to enjoy studying here.I am sure I will have a good time here.My introduction is over.
Thanks for listening to me

Answer 1

make me change more independently..这个意思是,让我更独立地改变吗?应该是change me more independent.让我变得更独立吧?