二十分钟之内回答多给分!我朋友写的,让我帮他纠错.IliketowatchOlympicgamesverymuch.Icanseemanygoodplayer.SunYangangYeShiwen,theyswimsveryfast.YeShiwenisonlysixteenyearsoldwhensherefreshtheworldrecord.

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二十分钟之内回答多给分!
我朋友写的,让我帮他纠错.
I like to watch Olympic games very much.I can see many good player.Sun Yang ang Ye Shiwen,they swims very fast.Ye Shiwen is only sixteen years old when she refresh the world record.She let everybody surprise.Bolt is very fast!He only use nine point four two seconds in 100 meter race.He also faster than world record.
I can see many interesting sports in olympic games.Such as canoeing,diving and so on.I think equestrain is very cool.But I seldom see the real horse.Pingpong is very exiting.Chinese player usually win.I think it’s easy,but after I try it,I think it’s not easy at all!
I learn many things in Olympic games.I hope next one Olympic games come faster!

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The writting is good apart from a few spelling errors.
I like watching Olympic games very much.
I can see many good players in the game.
Sun Yang and Ye Shiwen,swam very fast in Lundon Olympics.
Ye Shiwen was only sixteen years old when she refreshed the world record.
She gave everybody a surprise.
Bolt was very fast too!
He only creared a recorded time of nine point forty-two seconds in 100 meter race.
He also broke the world record.
I can see many interesting sports in Olympic games,such as canoeing,diving and shotting.
I think equestrain is very cool.
But I seldom see the real horse.
Pingpong is very exiting.
Chinese players usually dominate the game.
I think it’s easy to play,but after I try it,I don't think it’s easy at all!
I can learn many things in Olympic games.
I hope the next Olympic game comes faster!