假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

       2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Homesickness

Only a person far away from home and knows what happiness is.

It is the welling-up tears in your eye the lump in your throat and the waving hands when the train is drawing out of the station and take you away from home. It is the strength which you walk several miles to your home with heavy bags in your hands after a long tired trip and the excitement at the doorstep.

It is the sudden delight of closeness what strikes you when you meet a person from a same town or even a stranger who has just been there.

It is the fear of sing “Home Sweet home” in case of a burst of tears. It was the whisper of “Mummy” in dreams.

So warm a word is home and so a sweet sadness is homesickness.

Answer 1

Homesickness

Only a person far away from home and knows what happiness is.

                             ﹨

It is the welling-up tears in your eye the lump in your throat and the waving hands when the train is drawing out

                             eyes

of the station and take you away from home. It is the strength ∧which you walk several miles to your home with

              taking                             with

heavy bags in your hands after a long tired trip and the excitement at the doorstep.

                           tiring

It is the sudden delight of closeness what strikes you when you meet a person from a same town or even a

                                that                                 the

stranger who has just been there.

It is the fear of sing或of sing “Home Sweet home” in case of a burst of tears. It was the whisper of “Mummy” in

             to        singing                                         is

dreams.

So warm a word is home and so a sweet sadness is homesickness.

                           Such