帮我检查一下我写的这篇英语作文（初一的）“Myfamilyday”MyfamilydayMyfatherusuallygetsupatsixthirty.Butmymotherusuallygetsupatseventhirty.Ateighto'clock,myfatherandmymothereatbreastfast.Thenmyfatherusuallygoestoworkateightthirty

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帮我检查一下我写的这篇英语作文（初一的）“Myfamilyday”Myfamilyday Myfatherusuallygetsupatsixthirty.Butmymotherusuallygetsupatseventhirty.Ateighto'clock,myfatherandmymothereatbreastfast.Thenmyfatherusuallygoestoworkateightthirty.Mymotherusuallytakesashowerateightthirty.Atnineo'clock,myfatherisstillworking,mymothershopsforthevegetable.Myfathergetshomeateleveno'clock.Mymothergoestocookourlunchateleveno'clock.Intheafternoon,myfathergoestoworkatfourteeno'clock,andgetshomeatnineteeno'clock.Mymothergoestoworkatthirteeno'clockandgoeshomeattwentyo'clock.Weusuallyeatdinnerattwenty-oneo'clockandgotobedattwenty-twoo'clock. 大家帮我检查一下，文章的汉语内容就不用了，就看一下语法啊拼写啊，用法这些的，很重要的，谢谢大家了

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