英语作文的修改（内容稍微变可以）多用first,after,then,when,afterthat等词July15thwasspecialandharddaytome.Becauseismybirthday.Onthatday.Iworkupat9:00.Iwashedmyfaceandbushedmyteeth,aftermyfriendscameto

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英语作文的修改 （内容稍微变可以）
多用first,after,then,when,after that 等词
July 15th was special and hard day to me.Because is my birthday.On that day.I work up at 9:00.I washed my face and bushed my teeth,after my friends came to my home and congatulated my birthday with me together then we went to boring but I played it first time so I can'tvery well Next we went to my friend Chinase restaurant at 2:00.Because they held a my birthday party .They sent me a lot of nice presents I wass very happy.We sang songs played games and danced afterwe went to park at 9:00.We displayed firework.It was very beautiful.
I went home at23.30.l was very tired but l was very happy.So l couldn't sleep soon.
l realized that everyday could be as happy as birthday since people around mee all love me

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To me,July 15th was a special and hard day for it's my birthday.On that day.I woke up at 9:00 then I washed my face and brushed my teeth,after my friends visited my house and celebrated my birthday with me,we felt boring.So we went to my friend's Chinase restaurant at 2:00 for they have held one of my birthday parties .They sent me a lot of nice presents I was very happy.We sang songs,played games and danced .after we went to park at 9:00.We made firework.It was very beautiful.
I went home at 23.30.l was very tired but very happy.So l couldn't fall asleep soon.
l realized that where friends around,love around