要写英文e-mail给教授请假.我这样写有错误的地方吗DearDr.Terry:IamRita,ajuniorstudentintheDepartmentofAppliedForeignLanguages,EveningDivision,atShihChienUniversity,mychinesenameisTing-MeiWangandmystudentnumbe

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要写英文e-mail给教授请假.我这样写有错误的地方吗
Dear Dr.Terry:I am Rita,a junior student in the Department of Applied Foreign Languages,Evening Division,at Shih Chien University,my chinese name is Ting-Mei Wang and my student number is N0026031.I’d like to ask for a day’s leave for person reas for tomorrow(Sep,26th).I apologize for the inconvenience my absence from class may cause.Kindly please approve.Thank you.Sincerely,Rita -----------------------------教授有博士学位,平时叫我们叫他Terry就好不知道要先说明我自己是谁还是先说要请那天假最后不知道有没有需要写道歉那句有任何写错的地方都欢迎告知我修改感谢各位英文高手的帮忙谢谢!

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Dear Professor Terry:I am Rita,a junior student in the Department of Applied Foreign Languages,Evening Division,at Shih Chien University,my chinese name is Ting-Mei Wang and my student number is N0026...