高分求帮改自我介绍，注意要使高级词汇（难度高），顺便提醒有哪方面没注意到觉得悬赏少可以加，24号要用Firstofall,mynameisDengShilong.IamgraduatefromNo.107MiddleSchool.Allofyoucancallmynic

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高分求帮改自我介绍，注意要使高级词汇（难度高），顺便提醒有哪方面没注意到觉得悬赏少可以加，24号要用
First of all,my name is Deng Shilong.I am graduate from No.107 Middle School.All of you can call my nickname,Dragon or Der long that my middle school classmates called me ago. And I'm extremely excited to meet new classmates and teachers that will spend 3 years with me.
What's more,please let me introduce some of my personal life with you.I have lots of interests.I am fond of doing some reading,playing magic cube and playing badminton.I especially like to stay home by myself and enjoy the day without anybody coming to bother me.
Otherwise，I am enthusiastic about making friends because I made a competition with my partner when I was in middle school.In this way,our grades make gradual progress.I hope to enter a university such as Harbin Institute of Technology.
At last, this is my presentation, thank you all for listening.

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Hollow everybidies： my name is Deng Shilong.I am graduated from No.107 Middle School.All of you can call my nickname,Dragon or Der long which is that my middle school classmates called me ago. A...