请英语高手进来帮我改一下我的英语日志.谢谢!有什么好的建议可以提.有不好的东西可以删.日志内容：Topictwo:(1)CHOSENSometimes,Wemayhavemanydifferentwaystochooseinourlife,Suchascareers,educati

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请英语高手进来帮我改一下我的英语日志.谢谢!有什么好的建议可以提.有不好的东西可以删.
日志内容：Topic two : (1) CHOSEN Sometimes, We may have many different ways to choose in our life , Such as careers, educations and jobs . But different peoples may have different points . The choice what we wanna to be are become more hhinging .Sometimes we may fail and have many difficult…But how can we have a good choice ? It was become a big problem for us . (2) FATE: Have a good choice so that we can find the right direction in our life ,But it is impossible for us to have a perfect choice in our life . All of us should have to face the actually things when we walking on the future road ! But whenever could we give up our great dream !

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楼主错的地儿不少 修改如下：（1）Sometimes,we may face（have不准确） all kinds of choices in our life,for instance,what educations,careers or occupation should we have?（这里没有转折）Of course,differe...