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这篇英文美文有么有错误?thewoundofmemory回忆的伤口authorfongpeiyoungtr.fongpeiyoung作者/翻译方白杨SHeismygirl.SheiseverythingthatIcantouch.Underthecherrytrees,Iwanttofindwhat'smeaningoflove.Andthen

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这篇英文美文有么有错误?
the wound of memory 回忆的伤口author fong pei young tr.fong pei young作者/翻译 方白杨
SHe is my girl.She is everything that I can touch.Under the cherry trees,I want to find what's meaning of love.And then,I discovered an unrequited love fallen away from blue starry night.In ChaeWon County,I met her.She looked like an angel who comes from Paradise.I want to embrace her cute illusion shadow to sleep.I was a weird poet.And I'm obsessed with mystery fate.Maybe our love is missed,but our hurt must be fate.It can't refuse and fought by human will.I want to spy out her heart.She shot at me.I can feel her deep and tender wound.She told me that she will travel to far away.I acquiesced in this result.Perchance,secret love is meant to be a tragedy.I digged some soil and planted cherry trees.Sure,they were wistful in winter.But she appreciated drear and pathos.If I were plum flowers,I wish she is ゅき(it's Japanese.It means snow).And I will watch for her in all my life.I didn't hope stand by her side till the forever.I just want to love and guard this naive tendresse.Though I missed her since I was 17 years old,I believe missing will be eternity.For example,it is like desolate rain.Though this love is sad and melancholy,I will cherish her and her memory forever.Maybe my unforgettable love is the wind flitted across the butterfly in her heart,I still will treasure it.Just like when I first met her.
这里显示太模糊了,阅读网址在这里,还有中文翻译,
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你不可以把两个动词放在一齐,也有时间副词要放在句子之后!如果不明白,你可以再问我!