好心人帮忙做一下短文改错把...谢谢谢谢TodayiattendedintheEnglishcorner.ItwasthefirsttimethatanEnglishcornerhadheldinourschool.Manyteachers,includedsomeEnglishteachers,wentthere.Thestudents'unioneveninvited

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好心人帮忙做一下短文改错把...谢谢谢谢
Today i attended in the English corner.It was the first time that an English corner had held in our school.Many teachers,included some English teachers,went there.The students' union even invited Mr.Smith,a honored guest,to the English corner.He introduces some western customs and also encouraged us student to learn to speak English freely .But when i had a chance to talk.i felt a bit nervously and was at a loss how to say.It took me some time to get used to speak fluent English.I was determined to take part in so wonderful activities as often as possible.

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更正在括号处标明,总共十处错误,保证答案准确率!Today I attended (去掉in) the English corner.It was the first time that an English corner had (加入been) held in our school.Many teachers,(included改成incl...