fishmakegood我个人认为“鱼是很好的宠物”是不是太字面意思了？会不会有其它意思？

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fish make good
我个人认为“鱼是很好的宠物”是不是太字面意思了？会不会有其它意思？

Answer 1

"So I was so sad when they are died." are 去掉
文中重复使用but,可以用however代替.
"But I can't do anything for them,so when I grow up,I will join the WWF." but和so不能连用
"Now animals are fewer and fewer" 改成"Now the number of animals are becoming fewer and fewer"
"as more as possible" more改成much,as…as中间不能用比较级
“you will find that animals are love you too”are去掉
句中now重复太多,可以用at the moment,nowadays适当代替的
大致帮你改一下,如果要文章出彩,就多用点句型和丰富的词汇.
例如转折可以用however,承接句子可以用besides,in addition,what's more.
个人建议可以用personally speaking,in my opinion