求托福作文批改.狠批.我底子差,辛苦大家了.youagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Moviesandtelevisionsshouldalwaysshowaudiencegoodpeoplearebeingrewardedandbadpeoplearebeingpunished.我写的Moviesandtelev

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求托福作文批改.狠批.
我底子差,辛苦大家了.
you agree or disagree with the following statement?Movies and televisions should always show audience good people are being rewarded and badpeople are being punished.
我写的
Movies and television have become an indispensable part of life.Why do people like movies and television Because the film and television allows us to be
happy,access to knowledge and information,and even allows us to pass the time on the couch.But I think,watching movies and television the most important thing is that people can learn a lot of experience,clear understanding of the life and world view,and the basic principles of life.
First of all,Movies and television make this world a more harmonious and stable.For example,contributions to help others in difficulties,to communicate more with others,care for other people's feelings.This will allow them to pay you so.These are all positive behavior.Similarly,robbery,theft,even murder to give to others brought great suffering.Movies and television to let people know how to do.
In addition,Movies and television would allow people to establish the correct values,
so that people know how to tell right from wrong.In the real world,it may sometimes good people do not get good results,while the bad guy has lived a comfortable life.People of this world have disappointed.But in the film and television.Good man was rewarded for bad guys got their due punishment.This will make people to foster a fair and well-being of the faith.
Therefore,Movies and television on our lives is essential.Movies and television so we build a just and decent life.

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你这篇写的跟寄托里面的范文很像啊.应该你是看过范文的吧.所以啊.你就对着范文看看你的问题不就行了嘛.范文写的很不错啊.