这是一片写个一个国外老师的信.有没有什么格式,语法的错误!大家可以狠狠的批评.Dear…,Hi.,Iam...,thestudentwhovisited...severalmonthsago.Ihopeyoustillrememberme.Imissyouverymuch.Howiseverythinggoin

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这是一片写个一个国外老师的信.有没有什么格式,语法的错误!大家可以狠狠的批评.
Dear …,
Hi .,I am ...,the student who visited ...several months ago.I hope you still remember me.I miss you very much.How is everything going?
Firstly,I want to thank you for the invitation of join in the .I ‘d love to be one of your members in the future.Fortunately,I am planning to study abroad when I finish Chinese junior high school.
Secondly,I made a photo album for you and all the volunteers.It is about our America trip.The photo album has already been sent.The package should arrive before October .I hope you will enjoy it.
Best wishes to you!
Your truly,
...

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,I am ...,the student who visited ... several months ago. 这一句表达不清晰,我都搞不懂你想说的.
The package should arrive before October .
The package should be sent there before October.