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书面表达(满分15分)中国梦,我的梦,美好的梦想成就远大的理想。新年伊始,每位同学都有自己的梦想,假如你是李华,充分发挥想象力,写一篇英语短文来介绍一下你的爱好及未

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书面表达 (满分15分)

中国梦,我的梦,美好的梦想成就远大的理想。新年伊始,每位同学都有自己的梦想,假如你是李华,充分发挥想象力,写一篇英语短文来介绍一下你的爱好及未来打算。以下表格中提示词仅供参考,80词左右。

提示词:

性格

outgoing; quiet…

爱好

like playing tennis and comedies…

理想的职业

teacher; computer programmer…

如何实现

study hard;practice…

Hello everyone! My name is Lihua.

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答案和解析

Hello everyone! My name is Lihua。I’m outing and I like to play with children. I like playing tennis. my dream is to become a teacher. You know being a teacher is a thing that is very valuable and very interesting. I suggest that it must be a great fun to be with children all day. and if I am a teacher I can teach my students a lot of knowledge. they might become stronger and cleverer because of me. That is a very contented feeling. I will study hard to make me knowledgeable .



分 析:
考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。


【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语,可见该生英语功底扎实。如You know being a teacher is a thing that is very valuable and very interesting.等,if等使文章的表达更丰富,更有逻辑性,更富有条理。


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