书面表达：假如你是魏华，老师要你去Jack家通知他明天去公园栽树，但他不在家。要求根据下面的提示给他写一个50～70词的留言。1．明早8：00在校门口集合，乘巴士去公

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　　书面表达：假如你是魏华，老师要你去Jack家通知他明天去公园栽树，但他不在家。要求根据下面的提示给他写一个50～70词的留言。

　　1．明早8：00在校门口集合，乘巴士去公园栽树。

　　2．两人一组，每组栽20棵树。

　　3．劳动一整天，在公园吃午饭。

　　4．不要迟到，穿旧衣服。

Answer 1

　　答案：Dear Jack,

　　I came to see you, but you weren't at home. I came to tell you that all the class will plant trees in the park tomorrow. We'll meet at the school gate at 8:00. We'll go to the park by bus. We'll work in pairs. Each pair will plant 20 trees. We'll work there all day. So we'll have lunch in the park. Don't be late and wear your old clothes.

　　解析：根据题目“假如你是魏华”及“写一个留言”可知，应用第一人称手法写一篇应用文，即留言。留言是书信体，要注意书信体的格式：分为称呼、正文和落款三部分。根据题目可知，留言的收信人是Jack，因此称呼可以是：Dear Jack．正文是根据要点扩充的内容。落款是Wei Hua．由于留言是便条性质的书信，落款和原本应写在文章右上角的时间均可省略。

　　将短语扩展成句。1．We'll meet at the school gate at 8:00 tomorrow morning. We'll plant trees in the park by bus. 2．We'll work in pairs. Each pair will plant 20 trees. 3．We'll work there all day. We'll have lunch in the park. 4．Don't be late and wear your old clothes.

　　进行必要的联想，适当增加语句，使文章完整通顺。如文章开头可加上““I came to see you, but you were out. Our teacher asked me to tell you that…”

　　方法提炼：短语提示性书面表达题考查学生扩词成句，连句成篇的能力。因此首先要根据所给短语勾勒出文章梗概，再把短语扩展成句子，把句子串联成篇章。这就要求学生有较强的谴词造句，连句成文，谋篇布局的能力。