英语翻译千里之外,你的笑声总让我心安.老哥,你那脾气啊,给改改?咱家那门不便宜,也好几百啊!我有2个翻译：1,Athousandmilesaway,yoursmilecanalwayseaseme.Butmydearbrother,wouldyoutakecareofyourtempe

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英语翻译
千里之外,你的笑声总让我心安.老哥,你那脾气啊,给改改?咱家那门不便宜,也好几百啊!
我有2个翻译：
1,A thousand miles away,your smile can always ease me.But my dear brother,would you take care of your temper?The door of our house is not cheap,it’s also worth several hundred Yuan!
2,A thousand miles away,your smile lets me feel contented.Dear brother,your temper,should have a change?The door of our house is not cheap,it’s also worth several hundred Yuan!
最终版：Even we are a thounsand miles apart,your smile can always ease me.However,my dear brother,would you try to manage your temper?After all,the door of our house,which is worth hundreds of Yuan,is not cheap!

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第一种翻译更好.A thousand miles away,your smile can always ease my mind.But my dear brother,would you change your temper a little?After all,the door of our house is not cheap.It's worth several hundre...